Thursday, November 29, 2007

Argumentative Essay- Diego



Don’t Kill Nature If You Are Think Again.


Do you know that if you make a fire in a camp make sure that you turn it of after you are finish. If you don’t turn it of when you are camping then the forest is in danger because it could bur. If you burn the forest then you could put every animal in danger that life in the forest. Another thing that its bad is that if you do it then you will kill a lot of nature because the places that people like will not be there no more because it was burn.

People think that when you go to camp that they could make a fire because they want to cook some thing, or use it when they are could, that’s bad because if you don’t turn the fire out, the hall forest will be in danger only because people want to make a fire. If the hall forest burns then there will be a lot of pollution, and that’s bad for you and for other people, because they will get cancer or some other problems.

The second ting that when you burn a forest by making a fire then all the animals will be in danger, because of you, people say that making a fire is good and its not good, if any animal dies they you will be responsible because you kill it with your fire. If animals die by burning then there will be fewer animals in the earth and that bad for the nature because then you will not see the animal that died. That will be bad for the people that like them a lot.

There will be not that much nature as before only because there was a fire around there and that fire affected that place and other places, many people think that a fire will not do noting but if you are not careful then there will be something wrong, a lot of people don’t think what they are going to do, and it they do that what are going to be the negative ting. Will more and more people are making a fire when they go to camp the forest will be in more danger for the nature, animals, you and other people that life around their.

In Conclusion I learn that you shooed think twice before you do any think, or you could think the negative things that could happen when you are not that careful in the forest, or any ware when you make a fire, and one negative when something burn it will be bad for any living creature, like for the people they could get cancer, and for the animals they could die, and for the world their will be to much air pollution.




1. What is the thesis (main argument/idea) of this essay?

People should not make a fire in camp.

2. What are the three supporting ideas? (You can look for these in the opening paragraph but also in the "body" paragraphs.)

1. When you make a fire in the forest then you could kill animals.
2 You could burn trees if you don’t stop the fire.

3. There could be air pollution if you make a fire.

3. What pro-war argument is presented in Paragraph 2?
When you make a fire you could kill animals.

What is the writer’s counter-argument?

If you kill animals then you will kill nature.

4. What pro-war argument is presented in Paragraph 3?

You could burn trees if you don’t stop the fire.

What three counter-arguments does the writer present?

1. That there will not be a lot of animals.
2. You could kill nature.
3. Many people could die of air pollution.

5. What pro-war argument is presented in Paragraph 4?

There could be a lot of air pollution if you make a fire.

What four counter-arguments does the writer present?

1. People will die by censer because air pollution.
2. There will not that much oxygen.
3. There will much less animals to discover.
4. Most of the forest will burn.
Source: From Discovery channel.